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Standing at the edge of cliff,
Whispering to the wind,
Billows and rising tides
Are eavesdroping like some thieves...

Listen to the rhymes I sow beneath the waves of time,
Now I write your deaf riddles upon the shifting sands...
No need to touch my back, memories sigh deafening my ears,
Our yesterdays are fading, Dreams of you intoxicate me...

Rhyme your apathy to my empathy...
Drown with me all the vain curiosity...
Let me ride the same wind that has taken you...
But remember... all the paths to our yesteryears...

Howling surf on hazy harbor
dragging me away,
Black coat of deepening night is
cloaking my drunken tears...

The paths are lost tonight, life is dwindling in the cold,
Though you thought that i've grown mad, I'm stronger than your heart that's getting old...
No need to touch my back, memories sigh deafening my ears,
Our yesterdays are fading, Dreams of tommorow are intoxicating....

Rhyme your apathy to my empathy...
Drown with me all the insane sympathy...
Let me ride the same wind that has taken you...
But remember... all the paths to our yesteryears...

No need to touch my back, my eyes are set to where we should be...
Alone I'm finding my way, Dreams with you are fading away...

Rhyme your apathy to my empathy...
Drown with me all your worthless sympathy...
Let me ride the same wind that has taken you...
But remember... all the paths that lead to our yesteryears...

Remember... all the paths to our yesteryears...
just a sad song/poem
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lilitus Jan 8, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you very much=)
thanks for the fave as well=)
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DragonsChest Jan 3, 2009  Professional Writer
This is so very beautiful and heartfelt... :aww:
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lilitus Jan 3, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks alot=)
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:iconravensrow:
Beautifully written with great poetics. This was touching and for me it provoked memories of past and distant times.
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lilitus Jan 2, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you very much=)
i feel a little sentimental...
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psychotictwistedkat Jan 2, 2009
whoever you are waiting for.. i wish that person will come back to you.. :hug:
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psychotictwistedkat Jan 3, 2009
oh... well.. i dont really know what to say.. but you've learned and have grown- that's a good sign.

anyway, i pray that you'll find happiness my friend.

god bless! and ingats ka po!
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